Well done Mahira, Earthquake is a very interesting topic to pick, I would’ve never thought to do that which proves that your creativity thinking is next level! But there is one slight problem, the writing is quite hard to read but apart from that your work was amazing. -Savannah
Hello my name is Lauren. I am Samoan and Niuean, I love to dance and especially love my cultural dances. I love it because it helps me express my feelings,and you can also tell a story.My favourite food is SUSHI!!! My favourite subject is writing.
Well done Mahira, Earthquake is a very interesting topic to pick, I would’ve never thought to do that which proves that your creativity thinking is next level! But there is one slight problem, the writing is quite hard to read but apart from that your work was amazing.
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Thank you very much Savannah for the creative criticism. Next time I will try to make the writing bigger. -Mahira
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