Well done Mahira, Earthquake is a very interesting topic to pick, I would’ve never thought to do that which proves that your creativity thinking is next level! But there is one slight problem, the writing is quite hard to read but apart from that your work was amazing. -Savannah
Hi my name is Marteen and my favourite thing to do at home is watch the Harry Potter series, apart from that I am a hard worker in school and always finish my work on time. I also like to ride my scooter or bike.
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Well done Mahira, Earthquake is a very interesting topic to pick, I would’ve never thought to do that which proves that your creativity thinking is next level! But there is one slight problem, the writing is quite hard to read but apart from that your work was amazing.
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Thank you very much Savannah for the creative criticism. Next time I will try to make the writing bigger. -Mahira
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